Leave a web of thought.... [ Poemless ]

I shifted the old guestbook to this new one on Tues Sept 19 2000
which is why most of the entries are of that time....:)



Aggie [h] [e]

29

At last I am here browsing through some of the poems . I should have been here earlier , it's such a lovely site to linger . You have such a style of writing which is very unique . Thanks for letting me see this site .


Monday, September 30th 2002 12:00AM

elem [h] [e]

28

[PRIVATE]


Monday, May 6th 2002 08:42AM

JiNbOtAk [h] [e]

27

I'm not very conversant when it comes to poetry, only that I have to say I agree with one of the surfers, your poems does exude a certain mood, kinda dark. But hey, it's ur page, ur free to do anything bout it. My only comment would be, great job, you would have moved someone to tears by now.


Monday, April 1st 2002 11:02PM

ej [h] [e]

26

;) A nice piece. Keep it up.

piece?
:)
thank you.


Wednesday, November 7th 2001 05:40AM

azahari [h] [e]

25

You are excellent in poetry.Have been writing poems since 1987 and you have inspired me to carry on creating.My work pales beyond compare.hope to see more of your poems as time goes by.Thank you for letting others share in the emotions of your creations.

since 87? wow....care to share some? :)


Tuesday, September 18th 2001 10:05AM

francis lai [h] [e]

24

A job well done.

Love
Daddy & Mum

With eternal love and gratitude, thank you....


Friday, September 14th 2001 10:21PM

Tom [h] [e]

23

Hello. I've just recently started reading poetry and really enjoyed my stay here. Keep up the good work.
Poetry is a journey into oneself....I'm glad you started :)


Monday, September 10th 2001 02:22PM

callous [h] [e]

22

now that everything has feathered to ground, i am arms stretched waiting for your return
i am here, i never left. my alter egos however, are elsewhere.


Monday, June 18th 2001 02:53PM

lyselle [h] [e]

21

Great job... Nice changes.....


Sunday, February 4th 2001 02:20AM

fan [h] [e]

20

woi...
2001 started alredi... missing your poetry...

write ?

...


Friday, January 5th 2001 01:00PM

jy [h] [e]

19

poemless poet huh?nah..i don't think so


Wednesday, January 3rd 2001 01:40AM

Shards [h] [e]

18

heh
what can i say..... totally n utterly speechless from your words...... but i'll try...
the artwork very much suits the writings... creating the proper atmosphere... i dont think that it would b possible for u to separate the two elements without leaving one or the other lifeless...
still... much of the poetry/prose/free verse seem to revolve around a, dare i say, limited numbers of emotions..... most of which are pretty dark.. maybe this is what u r good at... maybe like many other great poets this are the emotions you feel n desire to express....
really liked to know where didja get those pics? didja take those photos urself?
heh.... quite for just trying huh? hehe =)P
nice to know there really are great sites made by our fellow country-person =)


Saturday, December 30th 2000 10:48AM

soul seller [h] [e]

17

With reference to your POEM entitled "Why":

-disabled-
I'm a deaf ,,, (you said, I couldn't hear)
I'm a mute,,, (understood, but I couldn't say)
I'm a blind,,, (I could say, but I couldn't find you)

-lonely-
when u didn't know me
this was the word which
I've always been with.

-happy-
when u didn't know me
this is the word which
makes me turn around and smile.

.soul seller.

"jal ja JUJU " "November e bo ja"


Sunday, November 19th 2000 01:40PM

~Sarah~ [h] [e]

16

I really like your site, the pictures (or should I say backrounds?) are very interesting as is your poetry. I really enjoy your writing and can't wait to consume some more. Keep up the good job!
~Sarah


Tuesday, November 7th 2000 03:37PM

Rick [h] [e]

15

The poem sreally bite, though I don't understand a single line. Maybe that's what you expect. What's next, I ask you (if you will answer) ??


Saturday, October 21st 2000 12:47AM

jfwalton [h] [e]

14

don't usually like female authors, your words are short, sometimes harsh, sometimes sweet, always real. very refreshing.


Tuesday, September 26th 2000 08:17PM

Vihang Naik [h] [e]

13

Your Comment : Hi ! Thank you for your visit to my site. I must say YOU LEFT ME is fine.


Friday, September 22nd 2000 11:55AM

Shanti [h] [e]

12

What i like:
The backgrounds (of the poems) are nice n abstract, sometimes suitable sometimes no. Also, the 'What's New' section is mostly pretty good - the ones i like are 'The Chinese Tongue is Frozen', 'Ugly', 'Core',
'You Are Who I Am' (this one especially so) and 'I Used To'.

'Part from those, some of the rest... well, aren't too great. Especial dislike for '-ified-'. Actually, the idea/concept is good, but somehow i just dont connect w/ the poem.

A final word: you (your site, your poems) should be shared with others, so that your writings can touch others the way they have touched those who have passed through these pages. Am going to fwd this URL to some
ppl i know whom i think would appreciate it.

Have a good day. :)


Tuesday, September 19th 2000 02:31PM

jason [h] [e]

11

-poemless poet- wow... i;ve never been ... i;ve never EXPERIENCED a poem site like this before...
who are you ?

i CANNOT let you remain anonymous to me...

my icq uin is [--censored by webmistress--]...

please... um... talk to me ?


Tuesday, September 19th 2000 02:30PM

Chewly [h] [e]

10

Very Enticing
Soaring wings of words fly free
Feathered poetry


Tuesday, September 19th 2000 02:29PM

Rick [h] [e]

9

I love your poem and I really admire it. I trully believe that those poems came from your thoughts and heart. I will always visit your website to read those poems because I really cannot tell the meaning behind them.
If you want my help on tour webpage design, or your lair contact me and visit my site that I have entered above.
Nice to meet you and have a nice day.


Tuesday, September 19th 2000 02:29PM

Navin Danapal [h] [e]

8

@Interesting site, will be reviewed in The Web Malaysia magazine issue for May 2000 under the section Literary web reviews as the 3rd entry.

Why is there no other messages in your guestbook?


Tuesday, September 19th 2000 02:28PM

someone [h] [e]

7

It is amaysing how much you can know someone through words from the heart.

I always believe that poetries are honesty that screams in the silence of words.


Tuesday, September 19th 2000 02:27PM

danny [h] [e]

6

thanks for coming to my site (holeinlung)...i've uploaded most of my writtings on my new site: the e-ken project.


Tuesday, September 19th 2000 02:26PM

Phye Beng [h] [e]

5

Sonnet 19

Spinning around in separate shadows
His eyes, her soul's inscriptions invited
Observes as her small, distant voice bellows
The conquest that painted words incited.

Has he found a mirror in these pictures?
The printed petals of a black lotus.
Pencilled emotions in vibrant colours
Her falling soul in a state of undress.

Marking his map, for he vows to return
For now to leave a note he simply must.
Hoping still his gestures she will not spurn
Nor let his sonnet gather in the rust.

Still shallow masculinity will strike
As he slyly ponders what she looks like.


Tuesday, September 19th 2000 02:26PM

pik pik pok pok [h] [e]

4

nyak nyeng sing...matakaji semanyi seng! Flan cis Seng!
tak piu-piu..pi tok tok..dreeeng..ngiu ngiu ngiu..
doing....ngik ngok, ngik ngok
tut TOO..ta TOO..ti TOOt!

Piu piu piu piu piu KRASH!!!!

Cheng cheng cheng.....SIU KAI YIK
NGO CHAN SHEONG SIK..
Tan hai, ngo lou mou wah ngo cau fai DENG..
Teh...ray...sah DENG....
kah deng-deng-deng!!!


Tuesday, September 19th 2000 02:25PM

m a r t y r [h] [e]

3

A headache was tiding and your page poured medicine like water over a campfire..


- f Ö r y Ö u -
you cried and ¶ could not touch it,
you pain and ¶ could not hear it,
you express and ¶ could not consume it,
you bleed and ¶ could not wipe it,

what ¶ could, ¶ would
what ¶ would, ¶ could not
what ¶ could not, ¶ would not
but what ¶ love, ¶ would
¶ would
¶ would
¶ would
¶ would
¶ c e r t a i n l y W O U L D


Tuesday, September 19th 2000 02:24PM

~~adelynne~~ [h] [e]

2

i really loved the prose "romantic is..." so keep up the good work, pal! you've got a talent in writing!

cheerio,
~~adelynne~~


Tuesday, September 19th 2000 02:23PM

Nev [h] [e]

1

Gosh...15 visitors eh? Man! Your poems are worth a million!! I like them. I love 'em! And F**K those who do not appreciate 'em.

Stay true dear...Lotsa love.


Tuesday, September 19th 2000 02:22PM